[Back Story: Last school year, as part of a writing exercise, William’s teacher asked the students to write a review. Every child except William gave a five star review. William gave a one star review of Skyzone, a trampoline park. His review became legendary among our friends.]
When I went to Sydney I had a delicious chicken pie. It was juicy with nice chunks of meat with good pastry. That was a store which only sold pies.
When you get a pie from a supermarket, it is probably not the best. Well this was a low, low score. It had gooey and disgusting looking insides which looked like jelly but worse. It was brown and disgusting. The pastry was ok but when it is covered with a gooey meat sauce I could not eat it.
And don’t get me started on the meat. It was hard and chewy and tasted like gravel.
One out of five stars. William out.
Since a lot of people requested it:
Tween Travels 
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